Friday, January 17, 2020

essay pre-writing

1.  I see a daisy losing its pedals with the ground cracked underneath it.
2. This scene represents a broken heart.

working with Ryan and Connor 

Thesis/intro
this card shows the end of a relationship
Outline
 Paragraph 1: the scene  represents a heartbreak at the end of relationship
 Paragraph 2:the pedals falling off are for the memories  she is trying to forget
 Paragraph 3:the cracked floor represents the broken heart
 Paragraph 4: the darkness of the background of the card shows the dark sate on mind she is in
 Paragraph 5:the leaf of the flower is showing how the man is trying to pulling her back into his life



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