when it says "everyone talking heaven like they just can't wait to go" you can argue on why you wouldn't want to go
"I could stay here forever"- you can argue why you wouldn't want to stay there forever
"I swear this is perfect"- you can argue on why it isn't perfect
Thesis: the poem is trying to show how special this someone is to this writing.
"this is perfect come kiss me one more time"
"lying next to you, in this bed with you"
"I don't know how, I don't know how heaven, heaven could be better then this"
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